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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow...this was captivating from the very beginning, and I can tell its gonna be a goodie :)
I'm not much of a 'kyuubi-naruto-brothers' fan, nor am I into many vampfics, but hey - you somehow...make it work. And make it work
very well, mind you.
I like the way you portrayed Naruto. While still in character, very different from normal. He seems to be smart, experienced, and he sure knows the art of seducing XD
and that, I find very sexy. You know, instead of the dumb, whiny Naruto...
also, I like the little brotherly bickering in the beginning, it just seems sooo like Kyuu to be speaking so rudely about Sasuke, knowing the fact that he means so much to his brother.
Well all in all...I dont really know what to say...
this seems to be a very...proffesinal fic, if you know what I mean XD
not a B fic!
kinda...If you compare Date Movie with... Eh, [insert awesome oscar winning movie], then your skills are like the oscar movie.
(hm... That comparance was kinda suckish)
Bye!
I'm not much of a 'kyuubi-naruto-brothers' fan, nor am I into many vampfics, but hey - you somehow...make it work. And make it work
very well, mind you.
I like the way you portrayed Naruto. While still in character, very different from normal. He seems to be smart, experienced, and he sure knows the art of seducing XD
and that, I find very sexy. You know, instead of the dumb, whiny Naruto...
also, I like the little brotherly bickering in the beginning, it just seems sooo like Kyuu to be speaking so rudely about Sasuke, knowing the fact that he means so much to his brother.
Well all in all...I dont really know what to say...
this seems to be a very...proffesinal fic, if you know what I mean XD
not a B fic!
kinda...If you compare Date Movie with... Eh, [insert awesome oscar winning movie], then your skills are like the oscar movie.
(hm... That comparance was kinda suckish)
Bye!
schedule
March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a really nice ficlet!!!! Can't wait for part two!!!! See you!!!
schedule
March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey Dreamer gotta give you love here too. You said on ygal that you were going to take some time with MM, but just I want you to know I don't care how long it takes all your fics are always worth the wait in my HO...great stuff once again...
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