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for Forbidden Jutsu of Love

by smilingeyes

schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg what is going to happen next. Please update soon
schedule May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woah. This story is awesome.
schedule May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not worth continuing?! Are you serious? PWP is like the greatest thing ever! Reconsider...please?
schedule May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg! You so have to continue! Its very rarely that I read a fic involving heterosexual interactions and this one has drawn my attention and I love it so far. You written up a complex plot and the smut factor is a plus. I want to see where they go with this new found powers. I want to see the study of their coupling as well. Does love play a part in this story? Any pregnancy in the future? You have to continue this and milk all the possiblities that this story has. You can take this so much farther. I do hope to see more of this soon.
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue this story because it is unique and I can't wait to find out whats going to happen.
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I love the awkwardness and all the shyness at the beginning. I like this very much.