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Hey Sake4every1 the story is good. But I had to read the whole thing which was long but enjoyable. So he has Ayumi,Jen-sei, and Senna when will he get too talk to the others. I wouldn't mind him talking to the other 6 bijuu some more. I like how you made chibi hinata give chibi Naruto his infamous goggles... LOL keep on writing hope to hear from you soon

Nice, Still an Epic story, I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. :D

im really feelin this story right now, and the lemons are awesome. but i just wanted to know if you could double space this bitch or somethin. its kinda hard to really flow with the story if i gotta stop and make sure which line im on. other than that i dont have much of a problem, other than naruto seeming to act a little bitch like. i mean he looks like a teen but hes still a grown ass man whos been through war and fighting some of the most powerful fuckers on the planet, he shouldnt be actin like a damn blushing virgin. but ive only read a couple chapters so far, so maybe he gets over that quickly. anyways i just wanted to call attention to the spacing of the story and how it makes it a bit more difficult to read. until next time

-The Don

Great story, both here and on FF.net. Can't wait for Naruto to kill of Danzo, and start fixing the problems of the world, like collecting Yugito and Fu. Keep up the great work!

YEAH! NARUTO GOT HER PREGNANT! Soon Chibi Naruto will have a little brother to look after and help raise. KILL DANZO!

Nice lemon. Very well done. I can't wait to see the next one. But bring in some clones if Senna really wants all the sex she can take at once.

awesome chapter and I hope you keep up the good work!

Nice chapter, and I'm glad you are continuing, and I can't wait for when they kick Danzo's ass, and I'm wondering is Naruto the stronger one or not that question was never really technically answered?

Haha nice one with the halo 3 quote in first scene ;) kewl story

Very nice. I'd like to suggest some snake bondage and toys from Anko to up the kink factor. Anyone can use rope, chains, and dildos... but only Anko can summon snakes that adjust to changes in the setup and can get the just right tightness for bondage. I love seeing Senna dominate other girls, more of that please!