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for Under My Skin

by Darkprism

person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww,... this was so heartful, I really almost cried... Really great story :)
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was very good! Consistent, funny, dark, hot and I loved the little details of stuff that you'd write here and there. I feel so sorry for Itachi, though... I'm glad that he could explain himself to Sasuke and now he knows too and doesn't hate him for the wrong reasons.
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for...well, endings that look up, at least.

Excellent work!
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 is so good I have to review it twice. Way steamy.
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh kami-sama, an update! Made me ridiculously happy :) i love this one: "He felt light-headed, proud, and dirty all at the same time. It was his favorite state of being." Keep writing, you're doing great!
person Anon
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I so want to like this pair I really do...but I just can't do it....I read it over at y and then again here thinking "Okay man up already it's only a fiction".....yeah so I tried agian but no.....no I don't like my Sasucake with anyone other than Naruto, or a triangle with Naruto in it...(so narrow minded I know)and a bit hypocritical too because I don't mind whoring Naruto out to Tachi, Gaara, Kiba, Neji, Sai, etc etc...but Sasucake may not play with others...yeah...sorry *hides her head in shame* please don't ban me...LOL...you can leave a reply or reprimand on y under the same penname if you want.
person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, amazing :) I love it :)
person pixi
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
5/5 so far :)
person Miko Vampire
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Kakashi will eventualy have to fight Itachi in order to make the possessive Uchiha back off and to prove that Sasu-chan is his!!!!!!!!!
person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter 2 hehe Kakashi and Sasuke are so funny at the beginning... But what's wrong with Itachi...? Why did he do that to Sasuke...!?