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i love this story and am begging for an update

Just saying that my vote for third wife is either Anko, or Temari. Great story, keep up the good work.

Haha, this is halarious!! I laughed so hard. And its a very unique idea too. First one I've heard of. The sex in the prolog was really lacking in details, but it had some good ideas (I really liked the anal bit) you just need to flush them out more. I can't wait to learn more about the koopa clan and what will become of Sakura? And why are the Mario guys speaking a different language, they both come from Japan after all? Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can! (though I hope you focus more on The Fox's Truth. This is funny, but thats just pure awesome!)

AND Hinata?! Well, you've got me convinced, this is officially the greatest idea ever conceived, and I will love you forever for it.

And so far the execution isn't half bad either, my only real complaint being Sakura and that she and Naruto had a thing. But hey, It;s your story, so I will try to limit my griping about plot decisions.

As a general synapse: Looks like it will be great, more lemons please, more Hinata please, less Sakura please, and most importantly, update soon!

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I didn't even think in normal ff.net that a mario Naruto story would work but damn did you kick that in the balls with this story^^

YEAH! GO NARUTO! FUCK YOU SASUKE! GO FUCK YOUR ROOT BUTT BUDDIES! LOL! Soon the Leaf will burn and Naruto will be back with his very (no doubt) horny mates.

I look foward to the next chapter, please update soon

thank you for the update. It's good to see this story going somewhere

any chance of an update soon? please

how about Fuuma Sasame? she is not affiliated to any village despite the fact that her clan is in rice country (her clan is not part of oto at the end of her arc)