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I actually went back and read 'denial' after this to fill in that part of the story..Man, i love piercings, and I've only read one before this which included a prince albert. There are a few spelling corrections, but nothing too misplaced. The sex ed was ..interesting.It's cute how they fight over the simplest things *blushes*

I honestly don't think this sounds same like the others. Some fics on here are either too rushed or don't go into detail. One shots often contain unnecessary stuff. Plus how you've worded everything makes me feel like it's been here a long time. It's satisfying.I don't feel like they kissed and are all lovey dovey and think they belong together as the perfect couple. the sex also isn't rushed just to please.
Will be looking forward to part two ^^