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for Payback Is A Bitch

by Daydreamer79

person Lilianblack
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved it, I couldn't stop giggling poor Naruto! ^_^
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha GIT-R-DONE NARUTO!! dwl aaw and yet he was so sweet about it. such a cutie, he really loves his sasuke. i felt all fluffy after reading it :) and of course sas got him back lol, good thing naru honey likes it
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm really bothered by the lack of reviews here.....I always leave my reviews for you at Ygal but I love showing you love here too....I felt so sorry for Naruto....what the hell was he thinking trying to out smart and Uchiha???
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aaw poor lil naru honey, it was just a stupid prank sasuke, no need to go crazy. sup they both enjoyed it though either way lol but that must have stung for naru to realise if he had just chilled he would have gotten what he wanted willingly hahahaha poor ting. i'm by no means a narusasu fan but i can appreciate a good revenge and i think sas def has it coming! lovely story as always :)
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You come up with THE BEST STORY LINES....EVER!!Oh that prank was soo Naruto! I almost thought for a second that he was going to slide the ice into his ass, but alas..*sigh* Handcuffs were great and i just Knew pervert Kakashi would be listening...Please let there be a sequel!?? *puppy eyes*
person cynaga
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Too much fun~! Your stories always are. ☺