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October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ugh!
ive never considered this pair before
and i love it.
so update soon.
and you should make this into porn.
thats the main thin thats on this site.
porn.
lol.
but yea.
you missed some words at the end but your forgiven.
love the plot.
i think you captured both characters well.
~Golden Kitsune~
ive never considered this pair before
and i love it.
so update soon.
and you should make this into porn.
thats the main thin thats on this site.
porn.
lol.
but yea.
you missed some words at the end but your forgiven.
love the plot.
i think you captured both characters well.
~Golden Kitsune~
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really gonna like Sai being an uncle. It was also endearing to see Gaara be warm and loving with kids.
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I also like how sweet you made the children, and they're so funny with giving Sai the rundown on what he is to do as an uncle. That was adorably cute.
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how I loved when Sai just looked at the kids when they were arguing and how Mairen only feels comfortable talking to Sai. When Gaara and Sai had their silent moment, I thought I would just melt, that really makes me squee.XD
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gaara seems like the kind of guy that would create such detailed artwork for relaxation,etc. I love that tender moment when Gaara just studied Sai marveling over the detailed work. You really captured the spark felt by both in subtle glances and other observances. I really enjoy reading the dynamic you created between the two. It makes me feel good.^^
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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! I also enjoyed when Kankurou could just, what did he say? '...feel the change in atmosphere...' when Gaara came in That just made it all the more real.
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August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I already like how you started at the ending, I also like the pairing. I can picture them saying everthing you wrote so well. I love how Gaara is so tender with his lover. I so look forward to reading this.^^
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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yum ; delicious~!
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June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
do keep writing. Sai makes me laugh. They're a cute couple :3
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June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. Looking forward to the next.