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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is good. Can't wait to see how it ends.
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May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*EMOTIONAL DORK ENDUCED TEARS*
Oh the drama-rama but I adore it soooo much. You really captured the warmth between these two in such a romantic yet kind of subtle way. It's adorable, teh touching, the sounds, the smells; it all collected into such a tender and heartwarming piece.
Oh the drama-rama but I adore it soooo much. You really captured the warmth between these two in such a romantic yet kind of subtle way. It's adorable, teh touching, the sounds, the smells; it all collected into such a tender and heartwarming piece.
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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I....I can't really think of anything.lol I loved this chapter as always. Sai being called Kitty tickled me cause thats my nickname has been since I was little. When Gaara was standing watching Sai and the little one sleep you could totally feel the...want he has for Sai, or at least I could. The kiss was simple but perfect, it was tender and new to them at least, nothing like others I've read when their shoving tongues down each others throats. The way they fell asleep was touchingly beautiful.... *sigh* I wish someone would fall asleep like that with me.lol. But anyways it was great so worth the wait. Can't wait for the next. Keep up with the mad awesome writing skills.
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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. No honestly I'm impressed. When I first saw what pairing it was, I really did not think it was possible to write it and keep them in character. But here you are proving me wrong.
You've keept them as much in character as possible, and yet managed too make them interact romanticly in a rather touching way.
Can't wait for the next chapter! You've officaly gotten me hooked! c:
You've keept them as much in character as possible, and yet managed too make them interact romanticly in a rather touching way.
Can't wait for the next chapter! You've officaly gotten me hooked! c:
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May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A kitty ANBU mask is perfect for Sai imo. Sai has such an innocent quizzical look sometimes it's just so cute. Snuggles between Sai and Gaara can melt any frozen heart.
I still like the fact that the baby only talks to Sai XD And he's spoiling her silly without even knowing it. How will she react when he dies?? O.O Will she ever speak to anyone? O.O
I still like the fact that the baby only talks to Sai XD And he's spoiling her silly without even knowing it. How will she react when he dies?? O.O Will she ever speak to anyone? O.O
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April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
first of all, you know how much I depise a cliff-hanger!!!! but seeing Sai cry, that deserves forgiveness. I could truly feel the tenderness and sorrow in that moment and my heart was ready to burst. I felt the 'baby' part from Gaara was a little weird but considering his love is about to die, anything can be said and done lol.
The image of Gaara being with his nephew and nieces is very adorable and must have been difficult, even for him, to hand them over. I remember you saying how tricky it can be to personify Sai and Gaara together because they lack a lot of the features writers often need to create a sotry and even more frustration when you put these two in particular together but you have done a marvellous job of it. The kids have most likely filled in the blanks that would occur when writing these two and they add to Sai's natural curiosity and Gaara's ability to adapt to new things.
OH! Uncle Sai! too sweet!
The seeds of love are sprouting! In Sai's belly too ^_^ When naruto popped in, I imagine little Mairen inwardly saying "you ruined the moment you idiot!". well done to Sai by the way, he pulls nasty little pranks quite well. Such a devil child.
I'm glad to see the relationship between Gaara and Sai building up and the directness from Gaara is finally bringing it together. I lok forward to seeing more touching moments hidden in Black Sand ^_^
see what i did there?
The image of Gaara being with his nephew and nieces is very adorable and must have been difficult, even for him, to hand them over. I remember you saying how tricky it can be to personify Sai and Gaara together because they lack a lot of the features writers often need to create a sotry and even more frustration when you put these two in particular together but you have done a marvellous job of it. The kids have most likely filled in the blanks that would occur when writing these two and they add to Sai's natural curiosity and Gaara's ability to adapt to new things.
OH! Uncle Sai! too sweet!
The seeds of love are sprouting! In Sai's belly too ^_^ When naruto popped in, I imagine little Mairen inwardly saying "you ruined the moment you idiot!". well done to Sai by the way, he pulls nasty little pranks quite well. Such a devil child.
I'm glad to see the relationship between Gaara and Sai building up and the directness from Gaara is finally bringing it together. I lok forward to seeing more touching moments hidden in Black Sand ^_^
see what i did there?
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April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it. Like Always lol. Sai was very in character, he switched from serious ninja to caring uncle flawlessly . And Awww Sai blushed that was sooo cute. Made me fangirl everywhere. Gaara finally admits that he thinks Sai is attractive heck yeah. But anyways keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol you're getting Sai great. He really becoming his own person the way you write him. Keep it up :)
Gaara is so direct it's sexy hahaha
Gaara is so direct it's sexy hahaha
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April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice pacing~! I like the sand art.
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh haha I love Sai's prank thats great. Heh. Sai makes such a great uncle! Though I kinda feel bad how he's not getting his smiles right, makes sit back and say "Awww" lol. But I still think your doing a great job keeping in character as much as you can. It's not like you can make it perfect. Sides if you did then he wouldn't be good for the story, you gotta bend em' just a little. But anyways your doing wonderful I can't wait for the next chapter. ^.^