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for Moon Eyes

by Sheemashelin

person TheIceMan
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the thought that went into this story and can't wait to read more.
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.It show a lot of new thing. I was happy to see Zetsu is well and creep as ever.He and Kisame were are my favs. So I hope to see Kisame some time soon.
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing.Work has been take most of my time. As well a few thing heppen that made me not fill up to read a dark fic but that should be in the past. I just read though the chapter a bit fast but it look like your story is good as all was. I like a few but changes you made { Juugo have a third stage and make Shikamaru jutsu a bloodline as well as it not working in shadow.Witch I never get why that work in the manga Chapter 108 page 1} I'm all so happy to see that Karin is a live and well.

I hope to see your next chapter soon and I hope I can review it to.
person anonymous
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter Zimmrie Kanoah, also thanks for the dedication. I will also keep a look out for anymore of your stories, thanks for the considering my request ^_^.
person anonymous
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The story is great so far. I would love to see Hinata get togather with Temari
person weskerism
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THANKS FOR THE MUCH APPRECIATED DEDICATION!!! I like the filler chapters, it gives the characters a greater opportunity to build depth within their identities. That being said...bring on the kick ass fight scene!!! Glad to be of help on the pairings even though only one of mine made it into the story; but hey that is better than nothing. Don't worry about Sakura (I'll just suffer in silence when it comes to her) and hopefully you can work your magic writing mojo on her! Still love where this story is going and can't wait for more. Don't really have any words of wisdom for you but still have much love for you! Again, thanks for the dedication it made my day! (Sad isn't it...LOL) TA TA FOR NOW!
person DaBerrila
schedule May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
no need to worry about the name i'm used to it but thanks. Love the story, can't wait for the next chapter. Wonder if isaribi is included, love to see her sane or insane. She'd be great for surprise attacks or scouting new areas along thier way to the volcano, probably die before or at the volcano due to the heat. How are the other akatsuki are safe from madra?
person DaBerrila
schedule May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah will kabuto-maru make an appearance or is he dead? If he's alive will mugen tsukuyomi affect his Edo-Tensi?
person weskerism
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HEY LONG TIME NO SEE!!! Karen huh.?...interesting...very interesting. Wasn't expecting her, she's not my favorite but the way you wrote her I started rooting for her. I'm glad to see her using her mind instead of hoping for Sasuke to save her or something of that nature. Short chapter but as always pretty damn good! As for the pairings, hm...let me think...I like Gaara/Hinata, I don't know if you are going to put Genma in this fic, but, if so Genma/Hinata, Kakashi/Tenten (yeah I know but for some reason they jive well for me), I hate Sakura so if you decide to kill her off she doesn't need a pairing (PLEASE KILL HER OFF, PRETTY PLEASE?) ^_^ if not pair her with Karen, of course Shika/Temari, Ino/Shino, Neji needs a man, I don't know who though, and my hero SAI (he's just too awesome to be paired with one chick, maybe he should get action on both sides if you know what I mean). Those are my opinions on the pairing matter. I hope this helps you decide. Still a true fan of your work!!! TA TA FOR NOW!!!
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
excellent work as usual, and thanks you very much for dedicating this chapter to me. Ilook forward to more of your greatness. P.S. my name is supposedto be DaBearila but thanks to a typo it's stuck as is, and I'm a guy. sorry for the confusion