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by Sheemashelin

schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow I got to say that was great. I mean I never like Kiba but this just show how dark this fic is. I mean haveing Akamaru killing his master was...wow. I'm going to like this fic if you keep this up.

See as Ino all ready alive and well. I got to say Chouji{as I like ChouIno] and Karin{as I like SakuKarin and I see her close her eyes and going by her tracking ability.
person Propaganda!
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mahh, you should keep Neji alive, Hinata can't be the last Hyuga! Plus, he's my favorite character, Gaara too. He's awesome too, cackle. Great story so far, can't wait to read the next chapter. =D propaganda!
person weskerism
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I usually don't care for Sai but you made me rethink my opinion. As for people who have survived, I would like to see Kakashi, Gaara, Hidan (though that depends on how closely you are going to follow the original manga), Kisame, Genma, Chouji, Lee, Tenten, Neji and Shikamaru. Since Hinata is still an active character, I hope you give the girl some backbone! I hate seeing her as a victim or someone who is afraid of her own shadow and needs to always be rescued. But hey, it is your story and I am still loving it! I was the first to rate your story with all five pluses! Take care!
person RyuEarth
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this side of Sai =)

And I pick Iruka, Kakashi, Kotetsu and Izumo.... But they are just about my favorite characters ^^;;;
person Sae Kokoro
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I'm probably just a random stranger here but I would like to see Sasuke alive. But, as you said, it's your choice as to who survives but I'm happy to offer a wanted opinion! ^^