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for Voyeurism, a Game Meant for Three

by Sheemashelin

schedule October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg. i love that game1
your shit is soooooo
funny.
i laughed at Shino's first truth for like 5 minutes.
"What is your penis size?"
omg.
sai was so funny.
lol.
that whole game was just Hilarious.
i love this fic.
i cant wait to read the other ones.
and the smut was amazing!
i loved it and i cant wait for more.
and i think you write Gaara very well.
i just love this fic.
one of the best and ive read a shitload.
so bow and celebrate.
freaking love this fic.
lol.

~Golden Kitsune~
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That story was so freaking HOTTT!!!!! I loved it, and can't wait for more. I, unfortunately, do have a tiny bit of constructive criticism,sorry in advance. Your spelling was a bit off, but didn't detract from the story in the least. Thank you for an awesome story, hope to read more from you soon.
person TheIceMan
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a great little erotic story. I hope there will be more of this.
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This fic was so sexy ^_^ I love those three <3
The game was so much fun. And it's nice tht you involved everyone from the Rookie 9 lol.

"Dare of coarse." Kiba said puffing out his chest like he was the greatest thing since sliced bread. This will make me laugh for the rest of the week lol XD (I like silly stuff like that)
person the_boyfriend
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yo,

really hot stuff, I don't think I will be able to sleep now (perverted mind in action)OMG. Sad to know it only a oneshot. But happy dance, you mention series of one shot around it. I got to ask who is in charge? Gaara (it seem to me) or Naruto, or was it a commun accord to who would top Sasuke. Keep with the good work.
read you later
:)
person Lilianblack
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More there has to be more, plz *pout*
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMFG WIN, WIN, WIN!!!!!!
person Gaia77
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I need to stop reading these fics!! Overdosing on inspiration these days and can't get these ideas out fast enough!

This was great and I can't get the visuals out of my head. I can't wait to read the next in your "arc"