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April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just stumbled on this story and decided to give it a look. I'm so glad I did. This is great so far. When I finally got to the end of chapter 5 I was like "Where's the next chapter button." You've got to update soon. I love it.
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Rawr.
I've been lurking around and I like your fic.
FYI - "Red Eye" should probably be "Aka Me" and not 'mei'. You have to conjugate 'akai' to use correctly.
But, Sharingan is closer to like, crimson or blood red, right? "Hiiro no Me" translates to Eyes of Brilliant Red/Scarlet might be better. "Ake no Mei" translates to Eyes of Blood.
Just randomness to share <3 Hope to see a new chapter in the future!
I've been lurking around and I like your fic.
FYI - "Red Eye" should probably be "Aka Me" and not 'mei'. You have to conjugate 'akai' to use correctly.
But, Sharingan is closer to like, crimson or blood red, right? "Hiiro no Me" translates to Eyes of Brilliant Red/Scarlet might be better. "Ake no Mei" translates to Eyes of Blood.
Just randomness to share <3 Hope to see a new chapter in the future!
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really do love this story, tehehe a stalked naruto by sasuke is sooo cute!!! I can't wait until the next chapter!! you have definitely made my week!! Thanks!
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. I'm guessing since the name is Akai Me - red eyes - that Sasuke owns the club. I wouldn't be too surprised if Sasuke was stalking Naruto or if he happened to have in some way influenced the person who gave the club VIP entrance tickets to Shikamaru. Sasuke's sneaky like that. XD
Looking forward to seeing them together again! ~ Jelp
Looking forward to seeing them together again! ~ Jelp
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April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sorry to lazy to sign in today....anyway...Poor Naruto, he doesn't even know what he has allowed himself to be caught up in. I guess since the club seems to belong to Sasuke or one of the Uchiha's I'm assuming he is not "stalking", but he sure made his claim on the stupified blonde...haha...At first I thought you were going to have the Redhead be Gaara....and I thought all hell is about to get loose! I can't wait to see how Sasuke works his magic on Naruto....Great Stuff..Thanks for the update.
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April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Could this be another club owned by Sasuke? Possibly. Naruto has nowhere to run. He should just give up and give in to Sasuke. That would really get steamy. Thank you for the update! I look forward to more.
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April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome story, but what happenedc to the next chapter? I know that the next chapter was loaded and I read it. Are you re writing it? I thought chapter six was really good, also. I hope that you put it back in.
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April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cool story so far!
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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*Welcome to the light side, we have stolen cookies from the dark side* (always wanted to do that :D)
I just have to say: smexy!!
And I like Sasuke being aggressive^^
I just have to say: smexy!!
And I like Sasuke being aggressive^^
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April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised the bastard didn't kill the men on sight for raping his blonde.....hope he does soon.....