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for Being a Yazkuza's Bride

by Namet

schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lo NOSEBLEED!!
person dreamers
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto, I wonder how he is going to take this once he's back in a stable state of mind. Lets just hope he doesn't get to mad at Sasuke for the little session in the shower. Haha.

Awesome fic! Can't wait for more. <3

-Akiru-
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn't finish it yet but it's great! "My love prize in viewfinder" is my obsession and I love Naruto! It's just perfect combination! And you actually used those characters from... so long ago like this Gatou guy (which I hardly even remember) and Haku... It's great! And Sai and Deidara!!! People normally underestimate them as a fanfic characters! Good work!
person Dorkchic
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Actually tomatoes are both. I saw it on food network. When they are hanging on the vine they are considered a fruit, but when cut up on your plate they are considered vegetables.
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is woooooooooooooooow. I CANT WAIT TO SEE MORE!
person qwerty
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke's aggressive all the way. Don't make him passive or gentle because that wouldn't suit his personality at all.
Great chapter! Keep going!
person Jelp
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto! I hope those guys get what's coming to them!

I also hope Sasuke and Naruto have a bit more time together in the shower - when Naruto's more willing. ;) ~ Jelp
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Definitely aggressive lover. So much HOTTER. Compared to Viewfinder, this really is tame. If it was Asami, Naruto would have been "raped" multiple times already. The way Sasuke is all confused about his own actions and feelings is kind of cute. I can't wait to see what Sasuke will do to that bastard, Gato. Maybe Haku and the cook will be gone even longer taking care of the perverted pest.
person Andi-chan
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Impatient Sasuke. I like it. Hahaha.
I like the pace of your story so far, and I'm glad you put in more details about Club Tengoku and the waiters and such in it.
I'm not sure why, but I LOLed at the idea of Shino being a bodyguard.
Anyway, I look forward to reading the next chapter.
person Mookfree
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yaaaah i love cookies lolool and this chapter :)