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for Shi Hatsu

by ResaSammy

person Sara
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There must be more!! $.$

I demands it!

My livaciousness aside, you have an excellent story set up (it would make a hilarious romanic comedy/shojo manga) and it makes you wonder who will win over all... or if they will all three win. It also has the opportunity for serious conflict and complication later on, dealing with issues such as coming to terms with sexuality and crossing the lines of friendship and whether or not friends can become closer... or if being close might destroy friendships. Plus it made me laugh so you have good comedic sensibility which comes through with your text.

Thus... write more. XD
person fan
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooo you evil woman how dare you stop there lol cant wait for the next update ^_^
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love it love it love it ^_^ but i don't want naru to choose all of them are so good for him XD *squee* >_<
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol you what would make this even funnier? if Itachi joined in on the fun for the pure purpose of taunting Sasuke, Neji, and Gaara but more so Sasuke then the other two.
person Kiki
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So cute I wanna read more