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for What Can I Do For You?

by Daydreamer79

person Mizuki Koshiro
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gawd, chapter 11 was sexy! I'll read chap 12 2mrw...
person Mizuki Koshiro
schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was awesome! Totally loved it! Followed you here from fanfiction.net
person Mizuki Koshiro
schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gawd, this was soo damn hot! Totally loved it!
person Mizuki Koshiro
schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I so adored baby Naruto! It was so cute! Loved it!
person Mizuki Koshiro
schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it is really good...I'll continue reading from chapter 7 tomorrow...
person Cocly
schedule July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Weeew, i like your series of story..
Especially ''eternally yours''..
I hope theres ada sequel for it..
=)
person sugar
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can you please make another one-shot of Teacher's Pet (my FAVORITE!!! one-shot) I love this one and everytime its the first story I read cause its JUST that awesome!!!! Well if you can or want to whenever time permits of course!! :-) Great one-shots and your writing rocks!!!!! :-)
person richon
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I fall in love wth your stroies, I love them, they are various, funny and sexy. You are a wonderful writer. See you soon with more ...
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha XD. Sasuke's face.. god, I can just imagine it. Nice to have a Karin who isn't a bitch, just obsenely obsessed with Sasuke and disregarding a restrain order. Kyuubi - I love him . More, please. ^^
person Jen
schedule October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really liked "The Preacher and the Prostitute"! I liked how there was dark, unhappy stuff in it, but the story didn't wallow in it. And I liked how Sai's ability with art was used in the story. I think if it had been any other male character in Sai's role, the story wouldn't have worked as well; we might have been wondering how Sai was able to adapt with relative ease to being with Itachi, but since he is an artist, it makes so much sense that he would respond positively to a situation that gives him back his art. And I really liked the fact that you chose Hinata for Sasuke's wife instead of Sakura; given the role Hinata played in the story, I think someone with a bulldozer of a personality like Sakura would have scared Sai off. And it was cute that both Naruto & Sasuke liked her. If it had been Sakura, I probably would have felt really bad for Naruto (he has HIV and Sasuke got his girl on top of that!), but with a different female, it was more OK. (In my imagined sequel to this, Naruto's health eventually improves.) Nice job. :)