rate_review Reviews

we just made a porn that was funny. lol

hm... you should write another one, just to see if the progress more XD

otherwise i liked it, good work.

Great NaruSasu story. I assume at the end Naruto was talking about the security video. Or did I miss something? Regardless, great one shot.

Wow, cool, I really loved the tension between the two and the sex scene in a restaurant.. grrr ;) !! It'd be great if you wrote a sequel or smt, I really would like to know why Sasuke works at the restaurant when he's obviously rich. Even who is the mysterious best friend of Fugako who owns the restaurant? I know this was probably meant as a smut, but still those unexplained details are a bit frustrating because there is almost no background story even though at the beginning it started out with the potential of having one. Anyway, even if you decide to leave it like this, I enjoyed it a lot and hope to read more from you!