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person moodysavage
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* just had to read this again. I adore this story.
person moodysavage
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol way to go...glad to see the teens get a wake up call. Thanks so much for this story...I absolutely loved it!Feel free to make any more LOOONG stories you want for us to read. Of course take your time...in between your real & important day to day life (subliminal message*type faster*) which takes up most of your time (subliminal message*type more stories*). I really did enjoy this. : )
person LadyWolf
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it...especially when they came together and realized that they love each other...but...Naru-bear??? Sasu-bunny???? Tiger Toes???? come on!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!

Great stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sweet ending.
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Naru-bear?? Tiger toes?? I thought oh shit here comes the Resengan....LOL....but then I heard him say Sasu-bunny which I loved by the way... and I figured okay they are all even....LOL...I was so hoping for more smut too....so are you writing another?
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
now THAT was not just good but great i loved the ending its perfict and simple
person MeLaiya
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok seriously. You had me right up until the very end. I loved this story, I truely do but you DEFINATELY could have done without the last chapter. That actually kinda ruined it for me. Im not trying to flame you love because Ive been following this from the beginning and have loved it. I just think you would have been better off just ending this with the chapter b4 the last.
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story and that epi was rolling-on-the-floor funny
person Timber
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The bear and bunny nicknames had me laughing and ready to turn blue from lack of oxygen....first thought....they totally had beaten on each other one too many times and had gone into candyland with the Sweet pet names for each other.....sooooo sweet it'll rot your teeth out to read it!! LOL LOL CUTE!!!
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tiger toes? WTF?!