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schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit!!! =O_O=

That was the most awesome battle scene I've ever read. Keep up the great work.
person Anon
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man now Sasuke knows something's up and I wonder if he will start figuring it out????
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was depressing.

Well nobody can say Naruto doesn't put others before himself. Sheesh. Hopefully Sasuke will snap out of his funk soon. Craziness.
person moodysavage
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this story! More more more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person cynaga
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT ~ this is good!
person Anon
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I'm wondering now if Naruto is actually leaving the clones becasue he doesn't know if sauske will leave??? okay see now you got me thinking of all types of scenarios.....can't wait to read Naruto's part
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Sasu-chan. I feel really bad for him, he's really at the end of his rope :(
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pity poor Sasuke.
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's only chapter one, but somehow i get the feeling i'll really like this one. see ya soon!
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The warring sides so remind me of discussions(arguments) I have with my bro about which one of them is better lol. I love this chapter.