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awesome update soon

OH GOD PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING!!! I seriously can't wait for the next chapter, I can't wait for what Tsunade and Hinata are going to do to Sakura! (evil chuckle) Tayuya as well? THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!! Pleae update as soon as you can and keep up the great work.

good so far and what doujin was this

You know, this REALLY would make a great Naruto/Tsunade story all buy itself. No harem needed. With the two of them trying to love one another with all the shit that could happen if or when everyone esle finds out about there love. I myself may just view this as a oneshot, but will read the other chapters when they are up. If you ever do write a story with them as the pairing only, let me know. Later

Love the story so far, I am very excited about Tayuya being part of the pairings. Can't wait for her chapter more than the others. Hope to see more soon. Thanks

Nice

Awesome Story! I really enjoy your portrayal of Tsunade, and her inner conflict with the desire to jump Naruto's bones. About the only complaint I have is your update frequency, but seeing as how this shiet be free and done in your spare time, I can't really complain now can I? I noticed a few spelling and grammatical errors, nothing so bad the story suffers, but as this is supposed to help you improve your skills, I would be remiss if I didn't mention it. I also enjoy your characterization, especially how you go and justify the extremely mild OOC in your character development, that takes skill and a strong empathy with the characters involved, so kudos on that.

Things I enjoyed were the Breast Milk moment with Tsunade, that was an extreme turn on, and I am looking forward to potentially more breast play in future installments!
I'm also looking forward to Hinata's role in this, she is my favorite pairing for Naruto, and Shipping aside, I'm glad to see her with a planned role in this story.

That's about it from me, thanks again for the story, and keep up the good work.

Sandmaster

A good story thus far. I like the selection of additional characters that you chose for this story, and that apparently it is going to have... gasp.... a plot instead of just mindless sex.

I am REALLY REALLY REALLY looking forward to more of this one keep it coming!!!!!