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by Jelp

schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think that for some reason, the boy were able to met in their dreams, even if they hadn't met in real life. So, yay for paranormal insanity!
person moodysavage
schedule June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love this love this love this
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I swear to god if you don't continue this marvelous story I will go on a fanfic strike >< I won't read about yaoi, I won't write about yaoi if you don't update this week and I'll make sure to let my readers know it too. Because my god woman this is brilliant and it was so sad and I was so willing for Sasuke to jump into the crazy just so he can be with Naruto. I was so hopeful at the hospital until you said that after he took his meds his roommate no longer looked like his Naruto and omg I can't tell you how much I love this fic. You know how rare it is to find a fic that reduces you into a mushy heap of 'awww, omg why is it over'-ness?
person Timber
schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was so heartbreaking to read....I felt so bad for Sasuke and worried for him. I kept thinking its going to work out in the end somehow it'll all come together. There are so many twists and turns and hazyness that I was really worried he had lost his mind and thats just too heartbreaking to think about. Its like they were ment to be together as soulmates and thats why they were seeing visions of each other. I really enjoyed how much this put such a strain on my heart for my favorite characters!!

AWSOME!! :)
person lividangel
schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow...this was different!
I LIKED IT!!!
very original:) and I'm tough to please!

I can't decide which I would prefer. happy endings are nice,
but there's something intriguing about "the beautiful mind"

thank you:)
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Your author's note at the bottom had my mind going in circles!!! Great story....I actually like how it ended as it leaves you in suspense :D
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm on the edge of my seat here o.o
I'm so confused Jelp rofl I hope it's real this time lol. Sasuke has to be a total nutcase if his own world is so real and believable.
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have woods! Where is my hot figment of imagination that has hot sex with me?

Ah well, one can dream. Beautiful story though, thoroughly enjoyed it from beginning to end.
person Kaliu6-san
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What I think is that you SHOULD UPDATE ASAP!!!!! that was braindamaging, but cool! :)
person Anon
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh, and another thing! what hapened to one of my fav fanfictions naruto you're not pregnant???? that one's even better and you haven't updated in ages *cute naruto style pout*! Anway, great idea, making Sasuke (maybe) imagining Naruto! I love mental fanfictions :D