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this was really awesome!! I wish that it was long it was really well written, I enjoyed your humor and the plot was very original.especially for this pairing!

Hi there - this is an AWESOME story. I do hope You do not mind my translating it into Russian. Actually I have already asked you about it. Well... I am sure You russian -speaking fans will appreciate it!
Hugs!
Seven T

Awesome story!!! Just plain awesome!!! I re-read it several times!!! I simply adore the way You describe the life of incubus - it was completely unexpected for me to read about starvation and suffering of the creature whos life depened on sex. Neji is simply awesome as Itachi and lovely pair - Sasuke/Naruto. It was really interesting to read about Itachi fighting for his mate and about Sasuke helping his dear brother instead of wanting to kill him as always. But to my great delight I have foung the additional story!!! It was just like Christmas!!! A lot of thanks for the treat!!!
And by the way - may I please have the permission to translate it and publish the translation? Pritty please?
With a lot of admiration,
Seven Troublesome

I love this story so far. I'm only on Chapter 4 but I am totally hooked. I will admit that I'm not a huge fan of Itachi x Neji but I love Itachi and I like how you've written Neji so it's all good. Neji is a good person for an incubus to mate with seeing that Neji translates as "screw". Sorry, I had to say that. I can't wait to see what is going to happen when Neji is brought back to his mate.

I'm glad that you added an additional chapter to this story, because I like this story. It's actually one of my favorites. But um...I'm like dying for a new chapter of Submissive Dominant. And by dying, I mean checking this website everyday. I'll give you ten dollars if you update that next. Okay...no, I probably wont, because I don't have ten dollars. But PLEASE update that one next.

Loved this story. I normally avoid things with Itachi in it as people always make him out to be an amazing sex god (ie, unrealistic). Turning this on its head and making it something that is more awkward than anything makes for an amusing idea that you pulled off very well.

It would be interesting to see a side story around Sasuke and Naruto, possibly how they got together.

exquisite~!

Ha, yes! If only someone would fan art Neji beating the shit out of that poor sap...

I never imagined Itachi and Neji as a pairing but you made it work. I hate that it had to come to an end but great story as if I have to tell you. I loved it!

That was a fine ending! Hiashi at a dinner party is nothing to be missed.

Congratulations!