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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You should add another chapter...just so we fan base can know for SURE what happens next...-shifty eyes-
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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH my god that was hilarious! Simply the best JiraOro fic out there. They sound like an old married couple and the lust is so maddening. While I'd love Minato to join in the Oro sexxings, I can't be too greedy, lol. Please write another chapter, please? Hell, please write more fics in this Universe, I'll worship you forever!!
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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The dialogue was absolutely superb and IC.
In my humble opinion, you successfully captured the interaction between Jiraiya and Orochimaru. Not fluffy but... caring in a sense.
Before I ramble even more nonsense, kudos!
In my humble opinion, you successfully captured the interaction between Jiraiya and Orochimaru. Not fluffy but... caring in a sense.
Before I ramble even more nonsense, kudos!
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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! I'm still laughing and blushing XD
For the life of me I couldn't remember my password to log in and review, my brain was so caught up in the web you spun! Usually in the morning I can't get so dragged into a story, but my god you are a spell weaver : D
Thank you so much for this story! It captured Jiraiya and Orochimaru so perfectly, and the details were so grand I found myself standing next to them and watching this whole thing!
You've reduced me to a giggling/squealing fangirl. Bravo!
I think everyones been needing a JirOro like this, its long overdue! *hugs your brain* Thank you, Prism0467's brain for bringing this about and forcing your puppet to write it x3 I will love you forever!
Sorry I went fantard xD I couldn't help myself! Thank you, again! (sorry if you get this review a few times, my computer wont load pages correctly and says they aren't going through)
For the life of me I couldn't remember my password to log in and review, my brain was so caught up in the web you spun! Usually in the morning I can't get so dragged into a story, but my god you are a spell weaver : D
Thank you so much for this story! It captured Jiraiya and Orochimaru so perfectly, and the details were so grand I found myself standing next to them and watching this whole thing!
You've reduced me to a giggling/squealing fangirl. Bravo!
I think everyones been needing a JirOro like this, its long overdue! *hugs your brain* Thank you, Prism0467's brain for bringing this about and forcing your puppet to write it x3 I will love you forever!
Sorry I went fantard xD I couldn't help myself! Thank you, again! (sorry if you get this review a few times, my computer wont load pages correctly and says they aren't going through)