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for The Sooner It Will

by ladywinterfic

person Anon
schedule November 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!! I hope to read more. Definitely enjoyed it so far
person Nibiki
schedule November 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best Naruto child ANBU fics that I've ever read. I love how you made Naruto not absolutely powerful. It had just the right blend it's needed to be believable. Please, please continue this story. I look forward to future updates, keep up the awesome work!
person YuuShi
schedule November 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, you can't believe just how much i had to giggle when i read the second chapter and the third chapter. heck, i need to cover my mouth so that my laughter wouldn't wake everyone up (especially when my parent's room is just right next to mine and my laughter would have been carried out through the window and into their bedroom window. It didn't help that my desk is right next to my window)

Bad Naruto, really, really bad Naruto. But heck, i can see Kakashi suffer. So it doesn't matter at all. Please continue to update this wonderful piece of work and seriously let me giggle some more. XD
person meh
schedule October 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can confirm that - much younger - than that can have them, from own experience, though guys may have dry orgasms before being able to cum.

Though, for the perspective, imagine fucking someone who doesn't look bad - but who you don't get horny looking at. Pretty similar to adult asexuals in fact from descriptions.

>> I miss being young ..a little. Fucking someone who you find sexually attractive is better, and I'm smarter, but that shameless fun for fun itself is gone.

Or maybe I should just visit nightlife. Too bad I hate clubs.
person meh
schedule October 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
He let a being(Orochimaru) who has skills and techniques in possession in close contact with his mind, inside him?

...Sheesh. I understand why the villagers would be vary better now. Nothing may happen normally, if it happens off-screen.....But Genre Savvyness practically dictates something to happen now.
schedule September 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it! i hope you can update here soon! If not, can you please direct me to where else you have updated?
schedule February 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so well-written that it makes my eyes bleed.

...Please continue?
schedule October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good story I love. it ^^ please up date went you can.
person Analilly
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this fic... first shota that I could actually read and appreciate... you're doing a wonderful job and I'm very courious to see what will happen in the next chapter.
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really well written. In fact most of your stories are. A lovely addition to the fan fiction world.