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Act I was amazing. I was kind of nervous when you kept mentioning hardcore yaoi. I love yaoi so I have no problem with that. I just wasn't sure what you were fixing to throw at me. But that wasn't a problem, either. It takes A LOT to really bother me in stories and movies and books. I'm weird, I guess. Anyway, I am really looking forward to Act II. So update soon, please.

Wow.. Kakashi really needs to get a hold of himself, that's for sure. I giggled at the thought of Orochimaru laughing at Sandaime inside his own head xD. You're updating really fast, it's awesome!

I think you deserve points for not overly romanticizing it.

Very, very good! Naruto HAS to meet Jirayia, it would be very interesting to see
jirayia's reaction to mini-Minato and Naruto messing with him. Requests, really? Nice. REQUEST: A KibaNaru-fic, 18-ish years old, maybe in a semi-relationship, fighting it out about who's on top because they are both stubborn like that. If not, anything KakaNaru usually makes the world go around, so just keep up the good work!

So, interesting idea. I once had a similar idea for a story, but dismissed it so I'm interested in how this will develop. As for the writing itself for the most part I like it although your tendency to quote extensively from what had just been said end up sounding force and not emphasizing the point which is what I think you're trying to do. Other than that though the dialogue is realistic as are the characters thoughts.

IT ROCKS!
God, I loved Kakashi trying to make sense of Naruto's abilities XD. They are both insanely cute, in their own respective way. Does an ANBU quit if they put their mask on the Hokage's desk? Saving Orochimaru from the fate of being a pedofile by nature, huh? Well, that's a kind of mercy, I guess.. Really looking forward to next chapter!

You're a genius. I love this pairing and I love the way you write. Did I already say you're a genius?

*bows at your awesomeness* UPDATE ASAP!! I am so hooked on this story. So I beg you to continue to feed my addition. Please and thank you!

You are awesome, just thought I'd throw it out there. :)
As much as my stomach also turned at the thought of 10-YEAR-OLD Naruto doing this mission, it was also very cute, and thank god that of all people it was Kakashi to do this. Naruto is fantastic! This 10-year old kid who can read most people like a book, but still has this film of innocence covering most things, is really well done. (Though he obviously also can see things for what they are). Kakashi's inner conflict about the entire set-up is also very very good, and not creepy in a 'I-didn't-know-that-kids-were-this-good-and-tight'-way. I LOVED it when he realized who Naruto was in chapter 1, and the following, in chapter 2, "His sensei was probably laughing at him from somewhere, that or he was sharpening the knives" XD, made me laugh really loud XD. REALLY looking forward to the next chapter, because I love this sharp, but not super!Naruto-kid you've written and Kakashi, as usual, just steals my heart away ;).

Loving it, can't wait for the rest of it.