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July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really wish you'd update this! The storyline is mysterious. What happened between these two? Why has Naruto appeared out of the blue all of the sudden years later when they're adults? Naruto is an interesting character because he's a nice guy, but I also find him repulsive.
Why on earth would he sleep with so many people? And what made him think he could seduce Sasuke so easily? If Sasuke hadn't coincidentally been questioning his sexuality, surprising him in a dark room and then forcing a kiss on him after he'd repeatedly tried to push Naruto away would have been a terrible idea. Supposing Sasuke had punched him after the kiss. What would Naruto have done then?
And in the present timeline, why is he trying to force himself back into Sasuke's life after so much time has passed? Why would he assume Sasuke has any interest in seeing him? (From the hints dropped, Sasuke is still incredibly bothered by whatever happened in the past.) Why be so forceful about reconnecting with Sasuke? (He's essentially twisting Itachi's arm to forcing Sasuke to work with him.) If he was that desperate about seeing Sasuke, then why did he lose track of him in the first place? Why come back now, and not years earlier? (At the *very* least, he could've had the courtesy not to bring his and Sasuke's personal issues into Sasuke's workplace!)
Sasuke doesn't have a great attitude, but as it looks now, Naruto comes across as incredibly manipulative. He got whatever he got out of being with all those girls in the past, and now that it's convenient for him, he's trying to force his way back into Sasuke's life, whether Sasuke likes it or not. I'd like to hear Naruto's side of things, why he's done all of this. I think it would be too much to try and rationalize all his issues so he seems like the usual saint Naruto. Better to let him have his flaws so that they're both at fault. (Otherwise, Sasuke comes across like the typical dumb/stubborn uke who doesn't know what's good for him.)
Why on earth would he sleep with so many people? And what made him think he could seduce Sasuke so easily? If Sasuke hadn't coincidentally been questioning his sexuality, surprising him in a dark room and then forcing a kiss on him after he'd repeatedly tried to push Naruto away would have been a terrible idea. Supposing Sasuke had punched him after the kiss. What would Naruto have done then?
And in the present timeline, why is he trying to force himself back into Sasuke's life after so much time has passed? Why would he assume Sasuke has any interest in seeing him? (From the hints dropped, Sasuke is still incredibly bothered by whatever happened in the past.) Why be so forceful about reconnecting with Sasuke? (He's essentially twisting Itachi's arm to forcing Sasuke to work with him.) If he was that desperate about seeing Sasuke, then why did he lose track of him in the first place? Why come back now, and not years earlier? (At the *very* least, he could've had the courtesy not to bring his and Sasuke's personal issues into Sasuke's workplace!)
Sasuke doesn't have a great attitude, but as it looks now, Naruto comes across as incredibly manipulative. He got whatever he got out of being with all those girls in the past, and now that it's convenient for him, he's trying to force his way back into Sasuke's life, whether Sasuke likes it or not. I'd like to hear Naruto's side of things, why he's done all of this. I think it would be too much to try and rationalize all his issues so he seems like the usual saint Naruto. Better to let him have his flaws so that they're both at fault. (Otherwise, Sasuke comes across like the typical dumb/stubborn uke who doesn't know what's good for him.)
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February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked... I just want the rest! :0( More pwease...
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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Arghhh! I wanna read more!
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June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's another wonderful fic, I'm loving it and can't wait to find out what happens next! So please update soon!!!
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I seem to be hitting all the stories told from Sasuke's point of view & I just love how they're done. He is just such a ball of complications. Loved this second chapter. More please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is perfect! I'm so curious as to where this will all lead. Please update soon!
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Usually I do not pay attention while reading - I mean only I like the story, then I go and see the name of the autour. Sorry, I know I am cruel and hard to please. BUT I simply knew it - the style was SO familiar!!! I knew it was YOU!!!! Wonderful, AWESOME YOU!!!! And there is ANOTHER OF YOUR WONDERFUL STORIES!!! I totally liked it, I liked the way you made Sasuke! It is so captivating to read your stories! I simply have to struggle with myself in oder to keep working and not to send everything through the window and jump to reading... Thanks - another big thanks for the pleasure!
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, this story is very interesting and very gripping, I've been waiting anxiously for a update.
There is one thing though, I copied the following sentence from the story and I think that there is a mistake there:
The feeling of Naruto's hands caressing him there made him blush, but he couldn't deny it DIDN'T feel good.
That is supposed to be: but he couldn't deny it did feel good.
right? I mean, that would make more sense? I think.
Anyway, love your work and can't wait for more :)
There is one thing though, I copied the following sentence from the story and I think that there is a mistake there:
The feeling of Naruto's hands caressing him there made him blush, but he couldn't deny it DIDN'T feel good.
That is supposed to be: but he couldn't deny it did feel good.
right? I mean, that would make more sense? I think.
Anyway, love your work and can't wait for more :)
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Part 2
I like how the story is written and the character interaction. I just love it when Sasuke is bossed around by his older brother!!! SWEET!!! lol
I can't wait to see what happens next!! Love the torture and suspense waiting to see how things develop between Sasuke and Naruto!! :)
I like how the story is written and the character interaction. I just love it when Sasuke is bossed around by his older brother!!! SWEET!!! lol
I can't wait to see what happens next!! Love the torture and suspense waiting to see how things develop between Sasuke and Naruto!! :)
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh...I actually thought Sasuke was going to go through with it! Now even more angst to digest for the next chapter.
Please update soon ^^
Please update soon ^^