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for Dirty Secrets

by Jelp

schedule June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story really has me burning with curiosity... I almost ran for the hills when I heard about the worms... it had a bit of an ick factor. But then morbid curiosity set in I sort of wanted to know what the hell pinworms were but I held back so that I could sleep peacefully tonight... morning... whatever @_@ It's definitely an interesting way to describe how he found out later he might like touching himself in that particular area. Knew Sasuke was a narcisstic S.O.B. But wow he must think Naruto is a real manwhore and I really wished he would have let Naruto catch him on the street or something so the dobe could talk. I think he might really like him and it's sort of cute Sasuke gets jealous off of petty, little things. Love your Itachi, he's such a sadistic bastard ^^
person Yabun
schedule June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I knew almost immediately what parasite Sasuke had. Silly adult Enterobius vermicularis, why must you inhabit little Sasuke's large intestine? This was the first time I was able to use my knowledge of Parasitology to 'quiz' myself while reading fanfiction. Oh what fun! <3
person Anon
schedule June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you know how hard i laughed at the whole little sasuchan and his tiny worms??? OMG!....he was so disgusted that he had become a "home for worms".....that cracked me up....i already told you on y how much i loved the second chapter. i do feel proud of sasuke for not having his first sexual experience be out of morbid curiosity the title for the next chappie...."Secrete Relationships", has me wondering what goodies you have coming up next.
person Timber
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jumped to this site to send a note...just read Lacking on your fanfic site!!! LOVE IT!!!

Would love to see it as a multi chapter fic!!! PLEASE!!! GRINNING!!!

The things you can do with this line of story telling.....I can't wait to see!!!!
person 7troublesome
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Actually very interesting story! Unusual plot and amazingly wriiten unsure Uchiha bastard! Care to write the next chap?
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very intruiging story! I can't wait to see what unfolds between Sasuke and Naruto!

Please update soon ^^
person amanti
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I never knew something like pinworms existed!
Can't wait to read more!! The fic sounds promising!