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for No Goodbyes

by Lanie12777

schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6: Stupid Kushina and Minato. They ruined the ItaNaru action! Oh, well. Man, I feel sorry for Itachi if he has to face Kushina. I have a feeling he's fixing to get a good telling off from her. Not that he doesn't deserve it to some degree but that's all in the past now. He's divorced and seems to be serious about his renewed relationship with Naruto. I only hope Naruto's parents go easy on him but I doubt it. Moving on to Chapter 7 now.
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7: Well, at least Kushina and Minato weren't too hard on Itachi. Not that Kushina gave the guy an easy time of it but at least she didn't spew flames like a dragon or attempt to literally bite his head off. Mothers! *rolls eyes* Great chapter and an amazing story all around. I look forward to reading more chapters in the future.
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: I'm just getting into ItaNaru. I needed a break from all the NaruSasu I'd been reading. I love this so far. Itachi, you bastard! You should have TOLD Naruto something. That's a terrible way to find out on your third anniversary, no less, that your boyfriend is engaged to a woman and is getting married. Naruto has the right to be pissed off at him. Worse, Itachi married Karin. Gross is about all I can say to that. Anyway, once I cool off at Itachi (I'm mad at him, too, Naruto), I'm moving on to Chapter 2.
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: Very nice, detailed description of Naruto's apartment. It's always easier, I think, when you can base something off something you know. (I hope that made sense.) Oh, thank goodness Itachi didn't have sex with Karin. She's just too gross for words. (I am NOT a Karin fan.) I am so glad he's leaving her. I can understand why Naruto would be mad at Pein but Pein was only trying to help him, I think. Pein's intentions were good even if the whole situation blew up in his face. At least, Sakura and Sasuke told Naruto what was really going on. Even if it didn't make the Itachi problem any easier for him but at least he knows why Itachi did what he did. Anyway, on to Chapter 3.
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: Nice to hear Itachi's side of things even briefly. Thank goodness, he's got some dirt on Karin. She can't swindle money out of him like that. I wonder what Naruto is going to do now that Itachi is on his doorstep? Will they get back together or will he send Itachi packing? Moving on to Chapter 4 to find out.
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: Yes! Naruto and Itachi are getting back together. And no more Karin with Itachi. Moving on to Chapter 5.
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5: That's telling them, Itachi! I loved hearing him give Fugaku and Karin that little talk. He said everything I would have said and then some! Yes, finally some light ItaNaru. I can't wait until they get back to Naruto's apartment so the real fun can begin. Moving on to Chapter 6.
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice work here, glad to read an update!!!
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! fianlly caught up. You update quickly... or maybe I don't pay close enough attention. lol I like how this is going, and I think its interesting that you made Karin Itachi's ex I wouldn'thave ever thought to pu tthose together ever. Nicely done. I'm enjoyin gthe ride and laughing at certain parts. I can't wait til the dinner wih the mom that should be utterly funny and I think I might die of laughter. Poor guy... he won't know wha thit him lol.

Later hope to see an update soon!

~Zimm
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work here!