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for No Goodbyes

by Lanie12777

schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work!!!
person Emma
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gah, even I haven't forgiven Itachi and it's not me. I feel like a little more begging for forgiveness is needed, because (I'm not sure if you want this) I really don't like Itachi (or Naruto's friends that all appear to be supporting the relationship). Anywho, I really like the story just not the whole, Itachi doesn't have a good reason to not tell Naruto that he was leaving.
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am curious to know where Naruto's support system is in all of this. His "friends" all seem to be more concerned with Itachi's goal of wooing him back than with the pain Naruto has suffered by Itachi's hand. It would be nice if Naruto had someone looking out just for him... like maybe his folks. Trust is a funny thing. It can be easily or almost freely given in the beginning of any kind of relationship, but there is a dark side where it can cause a most debilitating pain when the one you trust most betrays that trust. If Itachi does manage to woo Naruto back, I hope he will be able to patiently deal with the types of issues they will have in their relationship that were not there years ago. There IS no such thing as starting over. There will always be this history with them.
person dhur
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha I am definitely enjoying how Itachi needs to work!! Mwahahha Yay for new chapters!!! Can't wait!! Thanks!
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL Now I know why the chapters come so fast! XD Wow, you wrapped up both Karin & Fugaku pretty well! :D I thought it was going to be horrid & they are both going to do something so despicable that I will have to sic Kisame on them! XD Thanks for the fast chapters! :D
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow i really like this story. I have never read this pairing but you have changed my mind. Good Job. Well i'm off to read more itachi/naruto
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Such a great chapter! A lot was revealed here and I can't wait for more! PS, if my apartment was that color, I'm pretty sure I'd buy a paintball gun and load it up with some awesome colors lol!
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Go Naruto go! Rip Itachi a new one lol! I am such a sucker for lover angst haha XD Great work!!!
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Did you already have the story done? The chapters are coming fast (not that I'm complaining) :D

I liked how you inserted Itachi's POW here. It helps & I can see how genius can make mistakes. I for one can see Naruto forgiving him eventually but I hope that it will take a while & some hard core grovelling from Itachi! :D

Great job & can't wait to read more.
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is so good. I really wanna hit itachi in the nuts. is there going to be more?