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for Becoming a Man

by ShounenSuki

schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha that was great. Gotta just love messing with the ever impressionable Sai. lol. I hate that part on kingdom hearts when your fighting Demyx, and he's all the time yelling "dance water, Dance" that got on my nerves so bad. I couldn't fight him I made my sister to it. He just pissed me off so bad. lol but anyways great story I had fun reading it.
person cynaga
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
delightful~!


much more to come, I hope???
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL well done!
person tovah
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think that was so hot! I would love to see a sequal where Yamoto teaches Sai more about sex that could be so hot!