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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
beautiful
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This I must say is an absolutely awesome story so far! I do love these types of stories where Sasuke has to win Naruto back. But like always I hate that he left like that! Why must he totally crush poor Naruto! I hope he has a hard time winning him back, but like a true Sasunaru fan I do hope they get back together........eventually. Keep up the great work!
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I love the kids; they're so adorable. I can't wait for on this one.
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I really love this story and I can't wait until you update this. This has filled me with the warm fuzzies and I love Toshi already and I'm so sorry that Sakura and Lee died but I'm glad that Naruto has someone to care and love since Sasuke-teme just up and left.
Michiko thought Sasuke was a bum. Priceless. He probabably looks like heck and I like how you intepreted his trouble sleeping in a different way then if he had witness his families massacre. I might not be too fond of Sasuke but... poor thing, it must be horrible going to sleep to the images of your work... of helplessness and despair.
Meh, good, more... want... now... please. Thanks XP
Michiko thought Sasuke was a bum. Priceless. He probabably looks like heck and I like how you intepreted his trouble sleeping in a different way then if he had witness his families massacre. I might not be too fond of Sasuke but... poor thing, it must be horrible going to sleep to the images of your work... of helplessness and despair.
Meh, good, more... want... now... please. Thanks XP
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
INCREDIBLE start here!!!! I loved the whole chapter, you certainly did it all justice!