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April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this title not sure I get its meaning but I like it and I like the story and pairing very sad and sweet a little naughty, just good hope you keep going
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November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet and sad and unfair! if Sasuke wasn't... ya know, this could have gone on for more chapters! But I'm no tmad cuz it was still good love Juugo/Sasuke thanks
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February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story was soooo sweet and spicey and sad. I loved your yaoi scene especially, Juugo is a big guy and you made that so sexy it worked awsome with all the talk of his weight and pressure. Very nice. With that said..
The sadness had me in tears, well watery eyes I could not believe that ending even though I kinda saw it coming. The plot was different I liked it for these two. Juugo does seem like a sweetheart and I liked your gentler version of Sasuke, which I think he's more like than an angry brooder that most people write him as. And I don't know much about Suigetsu but you wrote him well as well. I also like Sasuke and Juugo as a pair and there isn't enough of them out there I looked and luckily found this.
My favorite parts, one was how Juugo snuck the dirty books in to Sasuke hoping he'd uh get excited. And I loved the picture taking (which by the way inspired me to write something along the lines of photography) And cutest moment when Juugo first went into Sasuke's room and asked if he was contagious after Sasuke told him he was sick, too cute. And I like how you snuck the reference to Naruto in there, when Juugo showed Sasuke the picture of Suigetsu and compared them. You know this stuff you wrote it. And it was good you're good for a beginner I'm out there trying my thing too. Hope you keep writing and do something again someday. I also added your story to my recommendations list. Sorry I ramble but good story.
The sadness had me in tears, well watery eyes I could not believe that ending even though I kinda saw it coming. The plot was different I liked it for these two. Juugo does seem like a sweetheart and I liked your gentler version of Sasuke, which I think he's more like than an angry brooder that most people write him as. And I don't know much about Suigetsu but you wrote him well as well. I also like Sasuke and Juugo as a pair and there isn't enough of them out there I looked and luckily found this.
My favorite parts, one was how Juugo snuck the dirty books in to Sasuke hoping he'd uh get excited. And I loved the picture taking (which by the way inspired me to write something along the lines of photography) And cutest moment when Juugo first went into Sasuke's room and asked if he was contagious after Sasuke told him he was sick, too cute. And I like how you snuck the reference to Naruto in there, when Juugo showed Sasuke the picture of Suigetsu and compared them. You know this stuff you wrote it. And it was good you're good for a beginner I'm out there trying my thing too. Hope you keep writing and do something again someday. I also added your story to my recommendations list. Sorry I ramble but good story.
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May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Juugo/Sasuke is too rare a pairing, so thanks for writing a fic about them. Much appreciated. I also hope you keep writing. This story was really good, you got a real flair for it. Here's hoping you do more Juugo/Sasuke in the future. :D
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May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how to get in touch with you but if you see this for your question about writing more stories it's a question mark IDK it's all free lance writing whatever I can manage to get out of me there might be more might not but I do love the team, and thanks for the review my first ever period is you awesome!!
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May 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sad, but well written.
Are you planning to write more Hebi/Taka fanfiction?
Are you planning to write more Hebi/Taka fanfiction?