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for When Mud Plays Dirty

by dreamers

person Carousel
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story was so adorable. =] I loved the mud wrestling, it was hilarious.
person Repanse
schedule May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh....oh....OH! I loved it! It was...so sweet *__* The scene in which they ride naked and covered in mud just begs to be drawn *ò*
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, the first paragraph sounded in my mind like something Morgan Freeman would say xD

Anywho. I enjoyed it :D Made me giggle! I loved how Itachi and Sai are some evil adorable couple! They would work together like that. Too cute.

That ride back must have hurt! Bareback while naked on a horse, ouch *shudders*

Sasuke would make a good cowboy. I hadn't realized it was a cowboyish type story! It had my eyebrow quirked for a while, but I enjoyed it! *smiles*

I'm going to be giggling about this story for the rest of the day xD if not longer!

I'm conflicted about the ending, it feels like it should go on...but I dont know if I'd want it to! XD If you ever do continue it, you'd tell me right? I'm going to hope for a yes ;)

You two did a great job, thank you for sharing!
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. The whole mud wrestling was oh-so-totally hot. Possible sequel?? ^^