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for Shinobi Can Be So Dense

by kittenblueheart

person Sora
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Delicious story. I can only hope to find love like that once in my life. Kakashi and Iruka are SOOOOOOOOO sexy together.
person Ryu Earth
schedule October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
not logged in right now ^^;

This chapter made me laugh lol. I liked the way that every one was there to protect Iruka.

thank you for the update!
person RyuEarth
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The "Yaoi Kama Sutra" made me laugh, and the conversation between all the summons and Iruka was both sweet and funny. It was a nice read.

Over all, I loved the chapter, thanks for the update!
person Annie
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I can't wait for the next chapter I'm hoping the dogs will utterly fall in love with Ruka, I know I love he and Kashi as a pair. Hope to see an update soon keep at it, it's really good:)
person RyuEarth
schedule August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was tasty! I am glad that you remembered to use lube, but, to me, it seemed to lack a bit of foreplay for Iruka onto Kakashi (perhaps, next time more groping/grabbing/holding/clawing at of Kakashi's body or maybe have Iruka give head) ^^

And Genma can be such a idiot some times, but I liked how Iruka lost his temper! lol

Also, the ending, I just know it's about the dogs! Can't wait to read more!

Thank you for the update! =)
person RyuEarth
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that Kakashi didn't freak out about the cat lol, and I like that they were both able to confess their darkest secrets. Though nothing beats the after-sex remark "It was like having sex with a dead fish" (and no, I don't know why, but I read a comic with that a LONG time ago, and it has stuck with me) ^^;;;

Thank you for the update! =)
person MaryMai
schedule July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is amazing!!!your story is one of the best I've ever read!!!it is so sweet and kind...i really like it!!please,continue writing it))I'm eager to read what's going to happen in the next chapters))))

and I didn't have any problems reading it. i liked the style very much,the story is very easy to read...
person RyuEarth
schedule July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol Iruka should stop worrying! ^^

Thanks for the update!
person RyuEarth
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi keeps getting 'cocked blocked' >.>;;;

Thank you for the update!
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story. :) KakaIru is my favorite pairing as well.
Keep up the great work.