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by catriana

schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good story, and I enjoyed it very much, especially considering that it's one of my pet pairings. My only complaint is that you kept switching from past to present tense and back again throughout the story. Pick a tense and keep it there, and it would be absolutely fantastic.
person a-long
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Just plain beautiful. Your very talented and I love this couple to pieces
person scarletwitchextreme
schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this and Oh gosh I love this pairing! More please soon!