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for The Beast and the Dog

by Sheemashelin

schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that's mean Gaara, leaving Kiba like that! But he got him!! Yay :P. I'm expecting Kiba to claim back what is his, it will be fun to read about. nd it was VERY hot ^_^ .
person LadyWolf
schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I've always known these two were hot together!

I hope Gaara sees that too...

Post soon!
person cynaga
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG So HOT~!
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Kiba calling the tanuki a cat is an insult! It was a dogfight, plain and simple! And GAARA LOST! OMFG losing never seemed so freaking satisfying!!!!!

Man, Z...you go there, don't you? ^_^
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gah!!!! MORE!!!! please? i can't wait to read where this goes!! it has me captivated i must say :) your Kiba is amazing and the way you had that fight was spectacular! I was getting a bit warm myself during Kiba's little speach lol
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeee!!!!! <3

I can't wait!!
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I thought that whole round of foreplay was HAWT!!! Yeah, Naruto was pretty dominating and I loved it!! The next chapter will be a hoot cuz I love games too.XD
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I absolutely LOVED the way you wrote Kiba for this chapter. He isn't one of my favorite characters, but...wow. lol
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're a naughty girl, Z... ^_^
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a fun chapter.lol Poor Kiba's got it so bad and I know Gaara wouldn't want to kill or maim his love interest but all the same, I'm afraid for him listening to what Naruto and Kyuubi say about being controlling.^^