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for The Beast and the Dog

by Sheemashelin

schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Run, Gaara, RUN!! Or rather... not :P
person cynaga
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You tease!!!

I love the name "Naruubii". :)

This is a really fun and sexy piece.
person tawanawelch
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I really find this pairing interesting. I like how you have Kiba loving Gaara's scent and that he is buddies with kankuro. It will be fun to see how they get together.
person tawanawelch
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it is really fun to see a lighter side to Gaara. I really wanna see Gaara get a lil loose and try to enjoy himself. I also like the brother banter between the two.
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy!!! I was so excited when Kiba got the woman off of Gaara in a protective way. I can also see Gaara doesn't want to be hurt.
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
We never get to see Kiba's family, that was a definite treat. I cracked up when Kiba had to talk to his mother about embarrassing scents. Him whimpering was too adorable.
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i would definately go for tag with hide and seek!! like start off as hide and seek and ends in tag lol but i'm really loving this so far :D i love the dinamic between the two of them and can't wait to read more!! please keep it up!!
person kr4nky
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, now i'm interested on how Kiba will dominate Gaara when he (Gaara) is such a crazy bitch. And Shukaku being female just add to his problems. Poor him. But i understand that your Kiba got balls of steel. Let see if he can keep them after a scene with Gaara (plus horny Shukaku).

I got to say i love your speculations on the structure of the Inazuka clan, the demons' mating season etc. I love details and IMHO they add to the story.

And, is there any chance of a side story featuring NaruSai when Sai return from his mission and save Naruto from a beating from Gaara (and a nervous breakdown due to over arousal lol)?

Much love for sharing, K
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.

Keep up the good work!
person cynaga
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
too much fun~!