rate_review Reviews

It's been a while and I am REALLY hoping for a new update? HINT HINT XD I've been checking this story for a really long time -- it's one of the last stories I follow in the Naruto fandom anymore, and I would say it's among my favorites. <3 Even if you don't update, just wanna say how beautifully I think this story is put together and everything :)

hey i've been following this story since you started it and it is really good i just can't wait for the next chapter so many questions lol will ian be alright will hidan and gaara make an appearance will neji start to enjoy naruto's company??? idk so many lol i hope you update soon

Like the story. hope it will have a happy ending. will sasuke get better soon? will anyone notice soon? can you please start an account somewhere that will send notifies when you update (like fanfiction.net)? dont need to put the story there, its pretty graffic so it is unlikely to get through the sensors; just some thing that says there is a new chapter up if you are a story subscriber.

What a horrible world... I hope they're going to be okay. At anyrate. Horrible world or not it's a well written story, though the world could use a bit of good old fashioned revolution to get rid of such a calous, horrible institution. I just hope they can survive in such a nasty place.

Overall, I really enjoyed this story. Yes, it was dark and disturbing, especially chapter two. That chapter made me really uncomfortable, I will admit. I hope you finish this.

The woman is Tsunade and she thought Naruto looked like Minato. I love writing characters, too. That's probably my favorite part of writing a story, coming up with characters and working with them. I would love to see Itachi actually. Anyway, moving on to chapter 4.

Omg...I went nuts when Neji and Hinata were put in there. Poor Sasuke. If that scar is what I think it is (from a certain someone) all hell is about to break loose. My heart bleeds for them yet I cant find it in myself to break away from this story because it's interesting. I cant wait to see what happens next.

I'm glad you like my reviews since I like your story :D speaking of which...I'm surprised that Ian and Edgar shocked me like they did. I think that it was seeing a couple who have gone through what Naruto is living wanting to do things to a kid when they have each other. On Ian's part it's almost like training the newer model if you think about it...then again maybe Ian's more vested in getting a "new friend" based on the kiss.

There were so many Naruto cast moment wins. I love Kakuzu in all his gangsta face shooting glory! It's incredible how much of a fit he is in this setting. I also loved Ino and Sasuke's interaction. By now I'm torn between awwing or wanting to cry for the boys, but seeing Sasuke get fiesty behind Naruto's back with Ino is kinda funny. Oh and Iruka arriving gives me some hope for the kids.

I hate to say that the kids overshadowed the tragedy. I feel like I'm going to burn in hell for this one, but somehow having Neji screaming at Hinata over failing was too funny for words. I just enjoyed him entirely too much considering the situation.

The plot is evolving in some interesting ways with the curse seal and I hope you stay encouraged to write.

APPALLING - the word that perfectly befits the theme and setting of your work. Note, I meant the 'theme' and 'setting'; not your 'work' itself because "Requisition" is a remarkable literary piece (as far as the uploaded chapters go), although a bit disturbing. The plot and setting are interesting and quite complicated. And your style is reader-friendly. (although if you applied one that's a tad more complex, you're on your way to being par with Edgar Allan Poe. D'you know him?)

Anyway, government sponsored brothels as a mean to satisfy demented individuals' phallic and morbid desires just to reduce crime rate? Is this how incompetent, lazy, pathetic, and simple-minded the law enforcers and government officials are? Secondly, destroying a whole powerful clan known as an opposition to the government and sending the exceptionally young, lone survivor to a brothel as the pathetic government's version of taking the child 'under their wing' (when in fact, they're just waiting for the right time when to properly dispose of the last survivor)? Third, Creating a whore of some activist's child as a form of punishment to the said activist? Lastly, Abduction of the children of powerful families by the government themselves? What happened with the law? Had it become just mere collection of pretty sentences written in a (dusty, old) book? Is the government a tyranny? Hmmm...I can't help but notice the irregularity (or the strangeness) regarding the laws in your setting.

Also:Deary, no offense, but you must have a serious streak of cruelty and perversity in you; you have a criminal mind, I say. Do you have some criminal record, mental/personality disorder or something that must have inspired you to create such milieu? Or maybe you have worked in such an environment? Coz so far, things are getting darker. You must put a really big warning before every chapter saying 'this ain't for the faint-hearted' or something like that.

Anyway, great job! ^.^
Hurray for Requisition. Hurray for you!

still reading,,,