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Cool cool. I'm liking where this is going. Keep up the good work, and Orochimaru is a tool, interesting how you've brought him into the story. I like it.

Um... I kinda want to cry... poor Hina and Neji.

Well until next time you post!

I cried too. Many times in this chapter... I was nice seeing you again. I had thought the story was too much. But until next time...

This is so sad. =[ I hope they make it out.

... still reading

I've read three chapters and will probably give it four before giving up on it completely, but right now there is a dullness to it. I think I understand what you're doing, but you keep on such a basic level.

You lost me. I had held out hope, but I don't think you'll accomplish your goal if your goal is what I think it is.

I hope I can remember everything that I was thinking. I get overwhelmed by the severe abuse that happens to the characters and get stuck on tangents. This chapter is scarily reinforcing the fact that a client like John Sutherland isn't immediately treated for being a sociopath, but allowed to be given the benefit of the doubt "accident" that it was an until he killed again. I think that when he was talking to Naruto that maybe he had his own issues with homosexuality in himself in addition to the misogyny he expressed at Nalee for doing something he paid her to do against her will. I also feel like he hinted about Naruto's dad and I really wonder about the circumstance behind Naruto being there since I'm beginning to wonder if it's similar to Sasuke's family political problems.

I also wonder about Kabuto, and increasingly enough, the receptionist. Kabuto strikes me as being really similar to the more violent customers, which even being in a setting where a clinical outlook is given to the wards you wouldn't want anyone who personally enjoys bringing pain to them especially when the child is already injured. The receptionist is bothering me in how he has no problem pushing fulfillers into as much work as possible. I'm also appalled at the caretakers for seeing children drugged out on painkillers as the norm. Then again, I think it brings me back to Sherry trying to justify what she does to Tsunade. I wonder about a place that allows this system to go on. In some ways it reminds me of slavery, even with the kids being released (and I might start to doubt if they would be released since 1.) they would be heavily damaged psychologically if not physically and 2.)just because children are used doesn't mean adults aren't...I think you hinted at that)

I feel bad for Ino entering the fray, but I definitely will continue to see how the situation ends up changing for all involved. I wonder if it'll only get better for Naruto, Sasuke and Ino and if so will they even concentrate on the fact that this system as a whole still exists or will it be one of those I made it out type of things.

This seems like a very interesting setting. I'm so far struck by the different adults used to get Naruto into the system and watching how they're subtly tying him to what they need for business. I love how we are getting a glimpse of what horrible things will come, but each adult is by omission setting Naruto up for this. For all I know, he lived such a horrible life that he may welcome this new change on some level. I wonder about the methods of getting fulfillers-it seemed important for Naruto not to have his father's last name.

I'm so scared right now. I think that a lot of fan fiction treats rape like some passionate excuse for love and unfortunately it's mostly from authors not understanding the full scope of the offense. I think my fear comes from you really nailing down the nature of the act. It's supposed to evoke terror, and surprisingly Tom was the scariest thing here. I'm torn between the customer who saw Naruto crying in the hall and requesting him for what was probably the violent use without the mouth piece or Tom's seemingly nice manner causing me to shudder at his actions. Then there's the scary knowledge of being able to recover quickly and suffer more bodily damage while your soul dies slowly inside or you lie to yourself to survive. I'm questioning myself for delving into this like I am so don't worry.

It should probably amuse to to know that Tom still disturbs me a lot. Just the ideal that he could be happy doing what he does with Naruto, and in his mind they probably have a relationship is making me flashback to a fan video of Osaka from (I forgot the show) creepily stabbing her teacher while this happy whistling tune plays in the background.

Then again it's scary that instead of trying to treat the mental problems in society there has been an extreme version of a brothel where the customers are basically allowed to commit what would be considered crimes because the victims receive excellent care. Granted that didn't help that little girl.

Tsunade is here! Sadly she could be thinking of either Naruto's father or her own little brother in this situation-granted clues have been dropped that maybe Naruto shouldn't be there at all. Sherry's conversation with Tsunade is definitely a shining example of why I'm reading this. I'm glad that I took the plunge and began reading and I hope you are encouraged to update soon. Honestly I would normally throw a measly it's good update when someone demands reviews, but this makes me think to much to stay silent and I didn't have to have a account to review.