rate_review Reviews

The story reminds me in a way of one I read where people were cloned for spare parts; they were treated "well" because they were a product. A very uncomfortable but feasible situation. I would like to see the boys with some kind of power (other than their friendship) to get them through. I know Tsunade will help Naruto but maybe there could be an underground organization fighting against the government and the running of these "institutions".

I can't stop reading; even though I want to.

so i dont know where you are going with this or how long the boys will be there but maybe neji or gaara maybe both. possibly kiba but when they are older perhaps. *shrug*
anyway you still have my interest even tho you have my stomach in sickly knots just to think about it. as for who the woman is duh Tsunade. i knew it was her the moment the dr. mentioned needing to bring in the gov lady to fix naruto. Tom is a dick and i dislike him. who naru reminded her of. could be his father minato or it could be her lil bro who died. i remember quite distinctly naru reminded her of both in the anime. ^^
hm... thats all i have to say currently. hope the next chapter is in the near future.
later zimm

alright subject matter aside this appears to be a well thought out story. i appreciate tha you didnt go into detail but you have enough that it hits you where it counts. i will continue to read as long as it stays this endearing.
good job and good luck
~zimm

Ugh. I want to see sasuke already so he can work on saving naruto. He is going to get him out eventually right? Right? Uhh I am confused myself why I keep reading this since it's so disturbing. However it intrigues me somehow. Hard to explain --must be the way you present it.

you're creeping me out here - just saying

Wow! This is well written and I like that you are writing this from the victims point of view. I am not sure if I will keep reading this, becausei am not sure I can handle it. But I do give you much cudoes for not glorifying it and making it pleasurable when there is no possibility of that. I also like that you are writing this about a very touchy subject that pushes a lot of squick buttons. And yes I skipped the authors note in the first chapter did not make that mistake for the second one.

Man... I just started this story and I'm breaking already... I was trying to read with dinner but I quickly lost my appetite. Ima try to stick with you to see where we go, but it looks like this'll be hard on me.
Oh and you should take off the 'add a chapter' button. I hit it by mistake and had to back track.

You've painted a picture that makes the reader want things to get better. I really like this story, and don't see myself as a freak for doing so. Lot's of terrible things happen in the world. And you are truly demonizing these pedophiles. Keep up the good work, it's a really interesting story.

...interesting.

Definitely not my usual read. But...I will give it a chance for a bit longer

i kind of like it not bad but i do have to say poor naruto poor poor naruto i hope he gets saves
please update soon