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for Iyoku (Desire)

by drivven

schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD!!! So sexy, so hot! I WANT MOREEEEE!!!!!! Please, please continue this story somewhere somehow!!! I thought I'd end up like Sasuke with the lap dance! And those three rounds in the first part - I didn't read this long and still so good one ever! It just got hotter and hotter, and them doing threesome and I just want to see them more, and Sai fucking with the brothers mind and wanna see them succumb, and be tortured and Sai owning them, and, and, and everything!!!!

So good, thanks!
person smint45
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly Hot!!!! I loved it!!!
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved it i would like to see a one shot that is about 6 months out that would be the best topper for this tale
person Kerrisa
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was ridiculously hot!! Omg Naruto is a BEAST xD!!!!!! AHHHHHHH I loved it I loved it I'm hooked I need more soon!! A wanton needy Neji is a great thing! I am soooo curious who the third lover will be!! So far, not enough hints! Sasuke could be a possibility... but right now Neji doesn't even like him and then there's Ino.. Shika is taken.... Kiba's status is unknown for now, Choji seemed more interested in his dinner and I kinda just remembered Shino was even present! Ahhhh!! so many unknowns!! I hope you update soon this fic is totally capable of epic greatness!!!


XOXOXs
Kei-Chan
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*Faints* Gawd your sex scenes are SMOKING HOT and dirty. Love love love them and love you too sis!
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This totally makes up for you not finishing The Choices Between Friends.
person Carousel
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant and hilarious and hot and amazing.
person Twiggies
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So hot! Can't believe it!
Hehe, I've always liked Neji as a stripper, even in this fic, where it's not as traditional.
Gosh, Naruto really pounded Neji good! Just too sexy!

And Sasuke was just too amusing! Repressed, and in the closet.
He was all too eager to go to the club too.

SO TBC? I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
person Carousel
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
By all that is holy....hot damn. That was the most...That was hot. More. Please.
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the story dear and can't wait for part 2! Happy writing!