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this is intriguing the way you turned this looking forward to more-

Having Kimmi enter the relationship would definitely be interesting to see (he's one of my favorite characters that doesn't get a lot of action in the fandom sadly) ... I'm just curious about how that would happen since Naruto and Haku already are being a solid (platonic at this point) relationship together already. But if it can be done smoothly, which judging from your writing style I think you're more than capable of doing, then feel free to do so!
Great job! Keep going!

This is such a good story. I'm really enjoying how it developes. A threesome... hmm... well normally I prefer when it isn't a threesome because many times it just seems like one of them isn't as important... but in this story I don't think that would be the case. I don't think Naruto or Haku know an awful lot about loving relationships and I think it will be pretty natural for them to become important to each other like that because they DON'T have anyone else. That would also make it very possible for a third person to be added and accepted as just as important because they haven't exactly had normal lives and I think they would WANT to accept the possibility of someone else caring about them. I think just being that important to someone else would be highly valued by them and a third person wouldn't be the 'less loved' person.

I think its a good idea for the addition of kimimaru simply because we really didnt get enough screen time with that character and that could give you a lot of free reign with what you could do with him in the story. Besides Naru deserves all the loving he can get, lol. Chuunin exams around its gonna be pretty interesting. So have fun with it. Looking forward to your next update.

Naruto really isn't that dumb, people just assume he is. Look at it, his education would have been near-ignored in the orphanage and any he did get was only basic before the academy. Even then I think any teachers OTHER THAN Iruka would have neglected him as well. Also I think he really is quiet smart, look at him in battle. Only it probably got that way that every time he showed any intelligence, people started complaining\accusing the fox of coming out. So he has to act dumb whenever he is smarter in a subject.

Even if he only learnt from his master, Haku would probably be smarter than Naruto in general knowledge.

I think Haku and Naruto should train each other. Haku can catch Naruto up on his education and Naruto can not only show him another way of life but even teach him other things-the shadow clone technique included. I can just imagine Naruto going on missions with or without Haku, acting all goofy and dumb but really being the smartest of them, even Sasuke. It would be so fun seeing\reading him beat the bad guys easily, the entire time making it seem like an accident or coincidence.

By the way, is this a yaoi Haku & Naruto story?

I am now addicted to this story! Please update soon! I love how Naruto calls Haku "Haku-chan"

At first, I wasn't too interested in reading your story because threesomes don't really interest me but after reading the first chapter I was just captivated. I'm excited to read about how much Haku's presence will affect the naruto world. Seeing Haku defend naruto from his teammates was enjoyable. Something I really enjoy about your story, other then that it is well written and interesting, is that you didn't make the characters OC like some other fics do. Its always nice to read a story that kees me interested while also maintaining a characters personality.

yay! I was hoping this story would continue... It had lots of potential.
Bwhaha, Sasuke got beat by someone who's technically a civilian. Snerk. Thats gotta be a kick to his pride.

I know everyone (including me) loves sakunaru but I think in this case it really isn't needed unless you want to put it in there. Really liking this story too.

YAY!!!!! you updated!! Hurrah!!!! keep it up, can't wait to see what happens next ^_^