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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. i like boy haku but i hope you don't completely ignore his "feminine" side, seeing as he apparently has no problem cross-dressing.
also i love "stand up for naruto" fics. it's about time someone does.
he's not an idiot, just horribly neglected.
also i love "stand up for naruto" fics. it's about time someone does.
he's not an idiot, just horribly neglected.
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was a little unsure at first, but the story (so far anyways) is really good. thank you for putting time and effort into it.
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June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haku is a boy in this? You're actually sticking with the series in that regard? Shocking! All kidding aside you have a firm grasp on the fundamentals of writing a story. Pacing is good flow is good. Not sure how you showings Sakura, but it did create a point of conflict so all right. Just to be clear this is going to be a Naruto/Kimimaro/Haku? I'm not too good at grasping those abbreviated names so I think Kimi is Kimimaro? Well I'll just have to wait for future chapters to see. By the way taking it slow is fine with me.
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June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love where this story is going! A Haku that's hasn't been feminized, is a ninja, and acts like it. Keep up the good work.
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June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Naruhaku stories are extremely rare. I like what you've gotten down so far. So I'm looking forward to your next update whenever that may be.
~Devious
~Devious