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OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGg!!!!!!!!!! *turns into a mass of goo* Haru-chan is so smart and cute!!!!! I may have died from all the sugary cuteness. XD

its really difficult to find fiction that has a great story line, has interesting characters and is well written enough for me to really get into it. this has it all. i was wondering, do you plan to have each snippet be a one-shot? i would like to read more about kiba and chouza (how it was when they got together, what the rest of the crew thought about it, how kisame and naruto handled the conversation with inoichi). i have always love gaara/lee pairings. i would like to read more about how or if that relationship develops. and, i hope you don't break my heart and have all of the hybrids grow old and die. come on!
thank you for this story. i haven't been so involved in a long while.

the ending of the chapter was so cute. im sure that shocked all of them.

Is anyone surprised that the baby with Shikamaru's genetic makeup is already so advanced?

What a remarkable family.

Aaaaw a little Shika!

I love what you are doing with these little side fics and I absoultely cant wait for the sequel! You've come a loong way with this and it just gets better and better!

I want Shika and Haru.

I loved the excursion to the planet.

I LOVED IT! The kits and babies are so adoreable!! Heaven knows Naruto and Sasuke needed that break:) I was giggling at Sasuke and Shikamaru talk about the planet. That was so Shi-chan to only tell what he wanted known. The high chair compromise was a good idea. Going to Papas office was to cute when Yoshimi squeal at the sight of Sasuke and the stampede was on:) Hikaru walking. I say clan leader material for him. Haru is to smart. Waits or lets Kazuki bring it:) That boy is a chip off his real fathers block:) Yoshimi must be the fastest he was on it when To-chan and Papa returned as well as the office outing! The sweetest surprise was Haru saying everyone name ahhh! This chapter was the bomb with a bang! You covered all my favorites! I really enjoyed:) 'Yea Baby' Thank you for all your hard work Space Queen ^_^

:( Poor Lee.

I feel so bad for Lee. I have to give you credit for giving Gaara that extra layer of selfishness and social awkwardness that we see in his actions considering his life. It would have been tempting to make him latch on to Lee but this shows more realism.

I for one still love seeing the children/kits. I thought it was funny when you posed that line about the kits making a bid for freedom when they really wanted Sasuke. Their love for him seems like there might be extra details involved but I can't quite put my finger on it. I see more of how the little ones are personality wise and that again shows a lot of talent. Kazuki liking Haru is really cute, but I wonder if Haru will have issues with his human brother and sister as they get older since Shikumaru gives him extra attention.

Haku is Haku... And Gaara is... Difficult. I enjoyed the interaction between Sumaru and Lee. And I cry for Lee... Like literally