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by mannahpierce

schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jiminy Cricket, more babies?!

I love Naruto.
person cynaga
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(((ryuu)))
person meowkuu2
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
a new baby!!!! scary but cool, I'm really starting to wonder how everything will turn out.. (seems that you have a lot of plot twists to manage good luck ^__________^) I hope for more chapters soon please and thank you!
person roro237
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Queen Spacer that was wonderful:) I got alittle choked up over how bad off some of them were, like two heads. You know I didn't see it comming! That the dancers would be caring people and not just fans. That was a great twist to me:) And Naruto being Naruto I still didn't guess that he would take the kit home! I love him even more now:) I got to give Sasuke his props to. I loved it when he said his six sons:) The love he and Naruto share is the stuff of dreams and I love it!! I love the kitlock I smile everytime I read it. Brilliant idea for the active children:) ~Bowing~ You just keep setting the bar higher and jumping it ^_^
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved all the chapters, but this one about Shikamaru's parents really got to me. It was great that his mother acknowledged the importance of his work, and his happiness. And ofcourse, Neji handled her fantastically. It made me so sad for Shika when I read the part where "--his heart fell--", about how she ofcourse wouldn't want another child like him. Neji must remind him of his awesomeness, hotness and general worth!
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the information on time! So there are 1440 minutes in one ship day, 36 days in one div, and 10 divs in one standard. Good to know! :)

Anywho, cute chapter. I love the Shika very much!! XD And the babies- awwww, so cute and cuddly adorable. Gotta love them!!!!!
person Gaia77
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok this one had me tearing up. I loved it! I'll admit I was nervous in the beginning but I was certainly tearliy happy by the end. =D Beautiful. I love how you stress love and family in these stories; all of them.
person roro237
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the parents visited. Once again all the people and going ons of the visit was amazing:) I was right there watching all of it! You're the Queen Spacer no two ways about it:)
person cynaga
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nara heaven~!
person halskr
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I really enjoyed the chapter and all of the interactions between Shika's parents and the children. Thanks for the timeline. It really helps. The newer chapters are easier to tell that time has past because of the children. That is probably the only criticism I can give In the Cold of Space You Find the Heat of Suns, which is the inability to tell how much time has progressed.