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for Tales in Tarrasade

by mannahpierce

schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG it's Meet the Parents in Tarrasade!!!

That was great!
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chapter 8 was really a good read. it had me hoping by the middle of the chapter that shika's parents would be able to move to terrasade to be closer to shika, and provide a second set of granparents for the kits and babies. i have no doubts that their son will move them up to the top of the waiting list in no time.
person Jenova625
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh jeez *_* You're easily like--THE BEST!! I have NEVER read a sex scene that made me feel so giddy and fuzzy inside. I'm super loving this KiHakuChi pairing "_" They are sooo cute :} You're such a fabulous writer...I can't stop reading this series--not even with my new job and subsequent earlier bed-time--hmm...>.>; Oh well--the lost sleep here and there is way worth it though XD

P.S. The pace and length of your chapters is like--perfect! Don't ever change it...unless you decide to make them longer? XD But really--they are great--I have yet to find anything seriously wrong with them. Keep up the wonderful work, please! *gives you a cake shaped like the internet as a bribe*
person Anon
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So much awesome. Read In the Cold of Space and this one, now I have to go read the others!
Thank you so much for writing!
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
person cynaga
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very beautiful! You use the sex to inform the love relationships (instead of adding a little plot to the sex) and it works beautifully to illustrate the love between the characters.
person nivell
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*re-reads latest chapter* AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw~~~~~~~~~~~*turns into googly mush*
person Gaia77
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!
person meowkuu2
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *waves bigger flag of happiness* I'm happy for those three and I'd love to see more of how that relationship turns out...(Gaara is getting abit..annoying.... oh well) and now two more characters?? I wonder what they want to talk to Naruto and Kisame for...hmmmmmm
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is it wrong of me to have cried at the end of chp 7...?
Amazing! I love the epic-ness of this fic