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Great chapter! Chase scene was exciting and like that Hinata accepts Naruto and is a friend to him. Can't wait to read what happens next ;-)

Cock blocked by my inner demon. Priceless.

Great story! Keep up the good work!

Imma looooooove you if you update quick! And you better make naruto be happy!

Love tha storie so update and be quick about it! <3

LOL! Interesting so far. Love how Naruto's pretending to be a damsel in distress, and Sasuke's eating it all up. :) Looking forward to the next chapter! ~ Jelp

i definitely didn't know what to expect! BUT i like where this is going and cannot WAIT until the next chapter is out!! I love sasuke's obsession and naruto's naiveness. Makes for a good story!! YAY!

Good chapter! Keep going!

I am loving this fic so far. I wonder if Sasuke will figure it out soon that Naruto is the fox. I hope so. Please update soon. I love your story.

I really like this story but I must caution you to make sure you proofread and edit your chapters before you post them =O Missing words, spelling/grammatical mistakes (like tense changes) can be really distracting and kill the mood you're creating with you're characters. Like the last line of chapter 2: I'm screwed, Naruto thought watching as the guard was bragged away. I don't usually review (bad habit, I know, I'm trying to change) but I did enjoy your story and want to continue reading future updates and I know I'm not the only reader out there that's turned off because of errors in the text. The last bit (why Naruto thinks he's screwed) confused me some, it's not clear whose blood red eyes he's looking at, i thought they were already watching Sasuke... but then a guard starts clutching his head, and then they see red eyes? =/ I'll re-read it though and see if I just missed something.

I'm looking forward to seeing how this story progresses and I hope you update soon. I like your Naruto and I like his relationship with Kyuubi, lol I even like how you made Sasuke a chump and am very curious how he's going to react when he finds out he's been played =)

I was laughing my head off when naruto started playing damsel in distress! XD

can't wait for more