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for Teichi (Spying)

by FairyNiamh

person Demoninmysoul
schedule December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear! I sooooo knew it would come to this, but the way you led the plot was still just too hot! And now I'm melting, like a good little sugar cube under the sunlight... And sooo want to see a sequel/second chapter where they really get it on.... Maybe even seeign Gaara under Naruto!

Thanks!
schedule November 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HA HA!! I love the twist at the end! Awesome!
person Bloodsuckingmonster FAM
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was SOOOO cruel, I feel used now.... TT-TT
.....I shouldn't have read the last bit, could have died happily otherwise..... *sob*
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was freakin' hilarious!
schedule December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so brilliantly written i love these kinds of stories they make me laught so loud
person fan
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oo you evil chicka i nearlly passed out as well lol
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
we're NOT pervs... (well ok yes we are) It's YOU who is a tease!
person Carousel
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. OMFG that was hilarious!<3
person drivven
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I may be the 'Cliffy Queen' as you say, but you are the 'Goddess of the MindFuck' ROFL It got me the first time too! And it's still almost painful to re-read, knowing what it 'should/could' be and what it really is... I would love to know just how it really is when it's not a massage... Lurve u dear
person Eremi22
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A back massage!?! I must admit, you got me good.