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August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you seriously need a major overhaul on your fic. love the idea but hate the way its been written out. especially with the stupid style/font etc... stuff that is all over the fic with huge spaces between paragraphs, summary like writing and more. get a GOOD beta reader to help you out. its a great idea you just need a good rewrite.
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July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh I love this I hope to see more soon!
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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work! You have great plot and character development, keep up the great job!
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July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I realy love the way you captured the characters and the way you use the manga and animated show for your story. I also love the fact you made naruto and sasuke character more realistic and the way that they should be. I would like to get an update on the next chapters for this story.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work!
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July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
For the record, I was CRYING at the touchy scene! So good! Keep up the great work, that cliffhanger was intense!
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story here, I cannot wait for more soon!