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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I love their role playing!
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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I just read all of your chapters... whoo hoo! :) Actually I really liked all of them... well actually all except Kakashi's chapter. Sasuke wasn't really interested and Kakashi was taking advantage/kinda blackmailing him so I didn't like Kakashi. However I would love to see Naruto and Sasuke do something to get back at him lol. Maybe they could do the same thing lol.
I don't think you're giving yourself enough credit for this one. I think you have done a great job of turning PWP into... well... PWITHP! You have Sasuke who still hasn't really given his approval for Kisame, Deidara and Sasori who have lots to work out and it would be great if Sasori knew that he was Deidara's first for something like that, and Naruto and Sasuke who have so much more they can figure out together, and then Itachi & Kisame who are all around de-lish and connecting all of the storylines together. Maybe Itachi could teach Kakashi a lesson about taking advantage of a Uchiha.
I think it's too early (if ever lol) to hand the story to others to continue because I think it's freakin' hot and I'd love to see where you take them. :)
I don't think you're giving yourself enough credit for this one. I think you have done a great job of turning PWP into... well... PWITHP! You have Sasuke who still hasn't really given his approval for Kisame, Deidara and Sasori who have lots to work out and it would be great if Sasori knew that he was Deidara's first for something like that, and Naruto and Sasuke who have so much more they can figure out together, and then Itachi & Kisame who are all around de-lish and connecting all of the storylines together. Maybe Itachi could teach Kakashi a lesson about taking advantage of a Uchiha.
I think it's too early (if ever lol) to hand the story to others to continue because I think it's freakin' hot and I'd love to see where you take them. :)
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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it the lemon scene was so hot. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Naruto & Sasuke were so cute in their experimenting. Hopefully now that they've gone this far, Naruto will know better about keeping Kakashi away from Sasuke. :P
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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww, shota love!!! I'm happy that you updated!
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, especially the kisaXita so far, and love the scenes! Its a shame this story isn't on your main priority or anything, but I'd like to see it updated soon :)
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April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! The best I've been reading in a looooooooong while!!
Please keep updating, cuz' it's really really good!!
Please keep updating, cuz' it's really really good!!
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April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! I love the discoveries of youth! Thanks for posting. It's good to hear from you again!
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November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love your fic!!! especially Itachi - manipulative, sweet, slutty little weasel that he is.
Sasuke's reaction to Kisame was priceless. Sorry, kid - maybe you don't approve, but we all do, so you need to live with it!
I'm generally not a Kaka\Sasu fan, so I'm just waiting for Naruto to take more carnal intrest in his little raven friend.
I like your Deidara, his friendship with Itachi and the way he is determined to get Sasori. Let's hope that when they become a couple Dei will get the hefty compensation for all the hot action that he is missing now.
I'm border-obsessive Madara fangirl, so having him in this fic is an extra bonus. Do you have any pairing planned for him??? Can I hope for one dominating, irresistibly hot Kyuubi to put the Uchiha in his proper place?? (huge, pleading puppy dog eyes)
Anyway, thanks for fantastic fic!
Sasuke's reaction to Kisame was priceless. Sorry, kid - maybe you don't approve, but we all do, so you need to live with it!
I'm generally not a Kaka\Sasu fan, so I'm just waiting for Naruto to take more carnal intrest in his little raven friend.
I like your Deidara, his friendship with Itachi and the way he is determined to get Sasori. Let's hope that when they become a couple Dei will get the hefty compensation for all the hot action that he is missing now.
I'm border-obsessive Madara fangirl, so having him in this fic is an extra bonus. Do you have any pairing planned for him??? Can I hope for one dominating, irresistibly hot Kyuubi to put the Uchiha in his proper place?? (huge, pleading puppy dog eyes)
Anyway, thanks for fantastic fic!
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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love Kisame x Itachi. X3 There aren't enough fics with this pairing out there. All of your lemons are wonderfully written. ^^ I especially liked chapter 3. XD